The Habit Of Hanging (Trifecta Writing Challenge – EEEEK!)

 

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For this weekend’s challenge, we’d like you to read the 33 words below and then add 33 of your own words to move the story along.  Have a great weekend and good luck!

The last strains of sunlight lingered in the corners, grasping every available point of refraction.  She slid her fingertips along the glass wondering if this was all there ever was. Or could be.

Please let me know what you think.  Good or bad.  Thanks! Here it is:

The last strains of sunlight lingered in the corners, grasping every available point of refraction. She slid her fingertips along the glass wondering if this was all there ever was. Or could be.

In the deep shadows of her mind, where her dreams lived, an idea took form. Perhaps, he no longer saw her as a danger. Perhaps he realized she was his one true love.

12 thoughts on “The Habit Of Hanging (Trifecta Writing Challenge – EEEEK!)

  1. Hi there just wanted to give you a brief heads up
    and let you know a few of the images aren’t loading properly. I’m not sure why
    but I think its a linking issue. I’ve tried it in two different internet browsers and both show the same results.

  2. The idea is excellent, but I think it needs work, because there’s too little “punch” in it. You know what I mean? The drama is there, but you need other words to “pull out from under the bush”. Great concept, but I think it needs other words.

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